Re: Pokémon: Conifer [SU/DS]
It's always interesting to see a younger character, and I think that Tin's mutation is fascinating in its alteration of his personality, as well as the physical abilities granted. However it seems that his drastic physical changes would make it exceedingly difficult to live a normal life, the agents in the town would probably be inclined not to let him be. A change in either Tin's current appearance or status in the community would be a welcome change. A bit more history would be a welcome addition as well.
"You see, in life, the road to darkness is a journey, not a light switch."
paired with the marvelous Eternal Moonlight, creator of the above