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Default Re: Through the Eyes of a Flareon ~ [PG] - Book Two

Originally Posted by VGBM View Post
Thanks a lot for that, although I'm not too worried. I'm sure I'll be fine once I stop procrastinating. It doesn't help, though, that my computer died last December and I have to do everything on my iPod (it's either that or constantly borrow my dad's Windowsaurus Rex that I'm pretty sure is older than me). Also, I know I will want to finish it, I'm just not sure if I'll be able to when school comes back.

It's funny you should mention the Canalve Library, cause that thread's the whole reason I started an account here. Unfortunately, I never finished the story I was writing for it and don't know if I ever will. (Not for the same reasons as the fanfic though, just writer's block.) But if you think it'll help, then I'll try to get back on that.

As to answer your question, I have the fandom section of this site bookmarked (mostly for the web comics) and this story showed up on it (as well as the Canalave Library before) and I thought it looked interesting enough and decided to check it out.
No worries! Well that's good then. xD Ahaha, as is the norm. Oh what. ._. I could never write a story on an iPod. DD: Aw man. Dx Maybe you should write it on paper instead. o: Seriously though, you can't save word docs on those things. And the typing and... Dx *wouldn't cope* xD Well that's the thing--you don't have to finish it all in one year or anything. When school comes back, you can still sit down to write a bit every now and again, even if it's just a few paragraphs or sentences at a time.

XD Oh wow, really? Well if you'd like, I could try to come up with a few ideas for you! And the minimum words is only 1000, so I'm sure you can come up with something quick. It's not meant to be super complex or anything; just something simple. ^^

Ooh, really? That's cool! xD I suppose it was a smart idea to submit it to the site then! Thanks for checking it out. :]

Originally Posted by Scytherwolf View Post
Yep. XD And yeah, I wish she could have done it sooner, but it's definitely good that she realized it now.

It will definitely be excitement! .0.

Well, whenever it happens, it'll certainly be interesting to read. o:


Really? XD

Yeah, silly Dusty. DDDx

Yay! 8D

Yus! o: I'm glad you're interested. xD

XD Yes!

Originally Posted by Scytherwolf View Post
XDDDDDDDDDDDD Really? Those were the first things I thought of.


OH I FORGOT WHERE I QUOTED THAT FROM. D: And no, she isn't. I wonder how she beats up Snap anyway. Probably because Rudy will stop him (because he has to CONTROL them) if he tries to fight back. What a toof.

Yeah, me neither. Understandably, since I haven't read as many stories as I used to and they're new. XD And that makes sense. o: Yep, that too.

It was definitely surprising! He's being bigly toofy. >:c
XDDDDDDD YES! Hahhaa, way to go inside jokes! xD


OH NO. Me too. (YES OF COURSE.) Bigly. Dx

Yeah. xD Good point.

OOO: Yep. Dx

Originally Posted by Scytherwolf View Post
Yep! .0. And character interaction is fun to write!

I thought it was clear. o: And yes, that's what I assumed and it didn't confuse me or anything.

Yeah, I think so too. Then that kinda ruined things (and like you said, understandably). And yeah, that's good that she decided that. And yeah, that's what I got from it too. Understandable, but she wasn't really thinking.
XD They are!

That's good! Okay, good. xD

Definitely. I'm glad you do! And yep. Dx

Originally Posted by Scytherwolf View Post
Yep. :c (XDDDDDDDDDDDDD Yes! I'm very glad you're not either! This and Schemes of Red would be....a lot less interesting to read if you were. XD) Yeah, it did! And yeah...D: I wonder if she'll ever show up again. It might not be likely, but ah well.

Yeah, I know he had a reason! I'm interested to see what it was.

Yeah, that makes sense. o: Awesome!

I'm definitely excitement to read it!

You're welcome! These are awesome to read! And I hope you do!
(XDDD They would be entirely toofy and have stupid friend-excluding timesing. xD) *GAPS* Yeah.



Originally Posted by Scytherwolf View Post
Okay, review for the current chapter!


Like Rudy Clone’s! XD

Paragraphs aren’t separate. O: Also, hopefully that theme park would not have a ride on top of a giant watermelon.

Not separated again. O:

XDDDDDDD Oh my gosh, yes!

*GAPS* XDDDD Hahaha, and the Bug's Life ride!


Originally Posted by Scytherwolf View Post
Impossible to squeeze between?


Both avoided

As the flapped?

Messed up italics. o:
... Yes. xD

*corrected them all* Thanks for finding those. xD

Originally Posted by Scytherwolf View Post
Well, first of all, I really like how you described the rock passage on the way to the mountains. It looked really bizarre and awesome in my head, and did seem like a dangerous place you wouldn't want to travel to. I really liked the image you described of it. And when they went into the tunnels, I was thinking, "YES! Cave exploration!" I'm really excited to see what happens while they're down there. .0.

I really liked reading the Azure flashback too. It was interesting to see a scene from her point of view and read her thoughts about it. It's neat to see another perspective of a previous scene. And it's also interesting to see her thoughts about Dusty change, and how she realized she was in her debt. I really wonder how she and Dusty will get along in the future. o: The brief explanation of part of her past was interesting too. Casting her out because the diamonds on her back were strange was pretty toofy. I wonder if she had any differences before she evolved, or if it happened afterward and everyone was pretty shocked about it and started assuming it was some sort of evil mark or something. I really wonder how that all came about.
Thanks! 8D I'm glad you do! Ahaha, that's cool! Yeah! o: I'm glad you go. c: Hahhaa, I knew you would love that. xD I've wanted to write about caves for ages and I finally got the chance. xD

*GAPS* Awesome! Yeah, definitely! I myself found it interesting, simply because usually I write from Dusty's point of view, obviously. xD Really? Yep, definitely. Yeah, it was bigly toofy. Dx Well she's actually Gemma's guest star, so that was part of the history she gave for Azure, so I planned on trying to work that in somehow. O:

Originally Posted by Scytherwolf View Post
Now I really want to know how Azure knows the houndoom, and what she condemns him for.

As for the houndoom, or Zaion, he was really making me angry in that chapter, going on and on about their fight and the Izante thing. He was being bigly toofy. Dusty hated being reminded of that and he just kept going and....feh. I was really annoyed with him. And how he wouldn't just stop no matter how much she told him. When he was all, "Just get over it" I was even more aggravated with him. I completely understand how Dusty reacted like that, and I hope he acts less toofy in the future.

I was surprised when he tried to run away as soon as the others appeared, but glad when Dusty caught him. c:< It was interesting to learn his name too. And I like how it sounds. o: I really wondered what his comment about loyalties had meant. I'm pretty sure that whatever it was, it wasn't Azure belonging to another colony like Dusty assumed.
OOO: c: (You only get faces in response. xD)

Yeah... Dx He can be playful but he goes too far, especially about something Dusty's obviously very touchy about. D: He was. Yeah... This is kinda why she finds it difficult to like him. xDx (XD Feh.) Yeah... >:c Hopefully he learns his lesson.

XD Really? Hahahaha, yes! (XD That face!) O: I'm glad you think so! It's a name I've had for years, and I made it his name ages ago too, but yeah, never integrated it till now. xD Thanks! YES! OOO: I think it'll be a while until everything becomes clear though. xD BUT I LIKE THAT YOU WONDER ABOUT IT! xD

Originally Posted by Scytherwolf View Post
I also like how Splash was acting the whole time. It was amusing. xD

I'm interested to see where these tunnels go and what'll happen while they're wandering in them (I know I already said this, so....department of redundancy department, but..I really love cave/underground scenes, as you know). I bet it'll be more interesting with the four of them together instead of just the two.

I think you did a great job on this and I'm looking forward to the next one!
XDDDDD Yep. He's a big adorable quagsire. Complacent. Oblivious. And all the rest. xD

Yah! o: (XDDDDDD Yep, I understand, and there's not really that much else to talk about. XD) I thought so too! 8D xD And hopefully they can all meet up soon. xD

Thank you so much. c: Yeah, I can't wait to keep producing them until I get to relevant stuff. XDDD Well, this IS relevant, but not very plotty I guess. It's progressively plotty. xD

Thanks for reading again. c:

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