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Old 03-30-2012, 01:14 AM
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Default Re: Kid Icarus: New Dawn [SU/DS]

This sounds like it could be interesting...but honestly, your plot could use a little more detail. I mean, I haven't played Kid Icarus, but it's still really vague and your explanation on how the technology works seems to contradict itself...
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