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Old 12-06-2011, 08:04 PM
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Default Re: The Aperture Science Storyteller Sphere Test || Portal <Updated 12-4-11>

Well, in this case your Christmas Special was written before the Space Core had his dream come true. Considering this, he could have had a role in the Christmas special.

But what is done is done. Anyways, I'm looking forward to new chapters. The Christmas story was a bit of a step backwards regarding the plot, and it really didn't tie into the overall fan fiction. I gave my Christmas Special for "A Day In The Life Of A Koopa" it's own thread. Perhaps in the future you should do the same.

But the writing is excellent, and the first chapter left me interested in the fate of the two new "subjects". Good luck.
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