Originally Posted by Max0596
I haven't watched/read much HP, so I really don't know what it's about.
"On cue, the aerial actors unfurls their wings." I might be wrong here, but shouldn't it just be unfurl? I've been wrong before, so I wouldn't doubt it's nothing.
But other than that, I thik it's pretty solid, but could use a bit more...flow.
7.75/10 (because I can, and it was in between 7.5 and 8.)
Keep 'em coming!
Side note: Nice new title for the thread!
Actually you are right. xD Yeah I guess the flow wasn't really there here, it was meant to be a riddle at first, but riddles -are- poems in a way. :D
Lol, thanks a lot~