Re: Diamonds of Poetries Etched in Time
I haven't watched/read much HP, so I really don't know what it's about.
"On cue, the aerial actors unfurls their wings." I might be wrong here, but shouldn't it just be unfurl? I've been wrong before, so I wouldn't doubt it's nothing.
But other than that, I thik it's pretty solid, but could use a bit more...flow.
7.75/10 (because I can, and it was in between 7.5 and 8.)
Keep 'em coming!
Side note: Nice new title for the thread!
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