Originally Posted by Puppet
Be nice with me. That's my 3rd battle scene, that includes one at the gallery.
That's my first battle scene with attack, that's hard. So If you don't like anything. Be sure to reply here again :)
ALSO I CAN DO LEMONS, BLUEBERRIES, CHERRY AND GREEN APPLE...
Soon with my examples.
No, I like it. The way you make the Toxic effect is great.
Only the male symbols are a little bit too big and don't really fit the text.
It'll be perfect if you can make it smaller or just rip any from the original battle scene.