Re: The Path of Destiny (PG/PG-13)
Niiiiiice. Very nice chapter - I didn't see a thing wrong with it, Scy. You need to stop doubting yourself XD Nice that Nightcloud is getting more of a role in the story so far; also good to hear about Nightshade's past, however depressing it was. Not all characters have a good back story, but they can often be stronger because of it.
Or go flippin' crazy, like Cyclone.
I look forward to the next chapter, even though you said the plot doesn't truly take off until 54. You have such a way with words that even "boring" chapters aren't boring.
Keep it up ;D