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Old 08-18-2011, 02:17 AM
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Default Re: Eon Sky: You Have No Idea.

Since it is color-coded, I don't even think it is necessary to put "Gear said" etc. unless it is a key moment with facial expression.

I think you still need to put more emphasis on physical descriptions during conversations.

Good improvement though. =D
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