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Old 07-02-2011, 02:05 PM
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Default Re: [WAR X] Drawn Art

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Team: The Cullen
Name: XaiakuX
Entry: http://i54.tinypic.com/34i1ufd.jpg




-Theme; Follows the Theme nicely. The Cullens' mascot is a wolf, and this shows a wolf. What else can I say.

8/10


-Creativity; This is just a wolf head, not very unique or creative. Very steroetypical.

5.5/10

-Neatness; It's kind of sloppy. That may have been the look you're going for, so sorry if this offends you, but I see two different styles in this.
The black shading looks as if it was drawn in crayon/pastels/coloured pencils, while the colouring/highlighting looks like it was done in Photoshop/Gimp.
Maybe try blending the two styles together? and the contrast looks a bit too harsh, my eyes had to adjust after looking at it for so long.
And I'm confused on the light source .-.

5/10

-Overall Appeal; Overall, it looks good! Just work on being more creative with your entries, and blending it together!

8/10

TOTAL: 26.5/40

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Team: The Cullen
Name: White Wolf of the Snow
Entry: http://i52.tinypic.com/msl95.png


-Theme; The Cullens mascot is a wolf, and I see the connection between that and the legendary dogs. I like how you tied it within pokemon. But it isn't as focused on 'The Cullen' as well.

7/10

-Creativity; I can definitely see that you put effort into this, and not going with the typical wolf shows that you were thinking outside of the box, which is great!

9/10

-Neatness; The Lines aren't that noticable to me. and the colour/shading is a bit off. I don't see a clear light source, to show highlighting and shadowing.
Working with just sketches, you need to be careful, they can look extremly messy sometimes, so be sure to erase all extra lines!

6/10

-Overall Appeal; Overall, it's good. It looks a little washed out, but that may just be my computer. nice work!

7/10


TOTAL: 29/40

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Team: The Cullen
Name: Hoshika
Entry: http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...or-d3km6qj.png




-Theme; a wolf is the mascot for The Cullen, so you match the theme. Also the flag adds a good touch of team spirit!

9/10

-Creativity; A wolf for The Cullen is typical, not very original. The fact that she/he/it is clenching a flag in her/his/its jaw is a nice creative touch.

7/10

-Neatness; Honestly, the sketch lines make it look sloppy, and rushed. The shading is good, I can see the highlighted aread and the shadowed areas, but the brush strokes are a little harsh.

6/10

-Overall Appeal; Overall, I really enjoy it. it's cute and adorable. Good job!

9/10


TOTAL: 31/40

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Team : The Cullen
Name : Foxamivalth
Entry : http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images...107011555.jpg/






-Theme; I see the connection between The Cullen and your submission. It's not as obvious though, There's not much else I can say about this.


7/10

-Creativity; After seeing so many Cullen submissions, It's hard to find the right words to say without sounding repetative. But just an image of a wolf isn't as creative as you could do. Try thinking outside the box!

5/10

-Neatness; The lines are very defined and distinct. The shading, for the most part, matches it to a light source, but a few things are off. underneath every furr ripple going along his back should had a shadow, since there is something above it blocking the light.

6/10

-Overall Appeal; Overall, it look decent. It's not extrordinary, but not bad. Just try being more creative next time!

7/10



TOTAL: 25/40


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Team: The Armada
Name: Lusankya
Entry: http://i56.tinypic.com/2dadu0w.png



-Theme; "My team's theme is ships, and this picture has ships in it. So yeah. " very well put. wouldn't have said it any better myself.

10/10

-Creativity; I like how you didnt just draw a ship. You actually made it into a scene with loads of detail . kudos.

10/10

-Neatness; I'm gonna have to say, it is a bit sloppy. It may just be your drawing style, so it's hard to judge. but in my opinion, the lines could be neater and shading could have blended together better.

7/10

-Overall Appeal; Overall, I think it looks rather nice. I love the details of the waves, the cannons firing, and the ray of light (or is it rain .-.) migrating from the left to mid way. Very good job.

9/10



TOTAL: 36/40


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Team: Vile
Name: Lilligance
Entry: http://i559.photobucket.com/albums/s...arktower-1.png





-Theme; I was a bit confused at first. But it does follow the theme. Not as noticable as I'd prefer, but it fits.

7/10

-Creativity; Very nice Idea! And very very creative taking your members and turning them into the pokemon of their choosing! good job.

9/10

-Neatness; It is very neat, no random lines and such. But it lacks depth, highlighting, shading, and colour.

5.5/10

-Overall Appeal; Overall, it looks nice. it would've been more appealing if it did have shading and some color.

7/10

TOTAL: 28.5/40


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First Place; Lusankya 3 points



Second Place; Hoshika 2 points



Thank you all for entering! Hope to see you next week! (:
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