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Old 05-04-2011, 04:43 AM
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Default Re: 004 Charmander

Username: Leader Skyla
Type of Submission: Sprite
Name of Submission: B/W recolor of Charmander
Link to Submission: http://i857.photobucket.com/albums/a...er_recolor.png

Rejected by BlueJello: The outline appears to be jagged in some areas. Avoid outlines that look like this, as it makes a curved outline look bumpy and jagged:



The one on the left is what I see on your Charmander's head (one on the top left and one on the top right). Try to give it a more curved outline, as seen on the right. Some sprites do use outlines that are similar to the one on the left (Scraggy's headpiece is an example). Correct it before submitting again. :]
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Last edited by Etymology; 05-04-2011 at 02:41 PM.