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Old 02-17-2011, 04:36 PM
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Default Re: can someone give me feedback/improvements on my story idea?

As for the name of the fusion, I would call it Gene Splicing because that is what it is. The story is interesting, and I have always liked science-related stories. I recommend really just working on the plot more. Plan out what will happen and write accordingly. Do not wing it, have it all ready to go. Also, make sure you do not contradict yourself, so read the story before you post it. Try to be original, and the title will come to you once you have finished the first chapter.

Good luck! Have fun!
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