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Old 01-27-2011, 05:15 AM
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Default Re: The Human Species (PG-13)

You know, separating dialog with one or two spaces was one of my biggest worries when I started writing, but I decided to go for the one used in common literature. Still split them into paragraphs when there's nothing but dialog!

The "appeared" thing is because the narration is not 3rd person omniscient, and if it was... Yikes! So many things would be spoiled! The true nature of Lucario must be kept secret a tad longer!

(Actually, the real reason is that I want to vary the descriptions a bit, since repetition makes things stale! The first rule of writing is that repetition makes things stale! One must always remember that repetition makes things stale!)

Thanks for the feedback! The next chapter will be up tomorrow!
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