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Old 12-24-2010, 09:14 AM
shaymingirl1 Offline
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Default Re: Want to know what u think of this start of my fanfic

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Originally Posted by Traxx View Post
Just a suggestion, but you might want to change some of the words like "told" and "replied" to some more exciting dialogue words?

Just a suggestion. Use it if you like.
thx for that u got any ocs ??? or anyone out there readingmy thread
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