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Old 09-10-2010, 09:36 PM
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Smile I need reviews and comments and help

I would like some reviews and comments on my story. Also, I need help in making some of my chapters longer especially chapter one and two.

Here is the link to my story: http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...d.php?t=108770

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