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Old 05-18-2009, 08:15 AM
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Default Re: Fan Fiction Chat/Feedback

Originally Posted by Graceful_Suicune View Post
(I might have a go at reading that fic! :D)

I wanted to ask a question...I think there should be a question thread here. x3

Now, of course I know (and so do all writers) that you can't have two characters' speech on the same line, but what about thoughts? I haven't seen anything on Google about this, and I ave noticed that a lot of people use other characters' thoughts on the same line as others' speech. I think it would be wrong to have two characters' thoughts on the same line, but...yeah.

Answers/comments? Thanks. :P

I think the rule should be the same as if a character is talking.

Without clearly stating whose thought is whose, it could become really confusing.

Yet, is it up to you whether you use my advice or not. :3

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