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Old 04-20-2009, 02:32 AM
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Default Re: Fan Fiction Chat/Feedback

It's not in the beginning at all, in fact there are a few spots when it is in the middle of things...The thing is,most of my story has running thoughts from my character, both in the present, and when she has dreams about her past that shine light on the person she is...When there are scenes where she is being told things she was not actually there to know/or see when they happened I think it makes more sense that they be in 3rd person as she tries to picture them, since it would be more interesting than a normal 'I listened, he said' scene (which have a lot of) and more emotional to ...
Maybe I should just write it and see what everyone thinks :). I don't think it will be hard to follow..
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