Re: Behind the Eyes of Cipher
I agree with Dark. This story is incredible! Caiden is a likable protagonist, nothing disrupted the flow of the story, you described it well enough that I could imagine it all in my mind, and the pace was just right. Cipher isn't a very... loved team in the fanfiction area, so I'm glad to see someone writing about them. I think you could have described Caiden better, though; instead of rattling off his physical traits at the very beginning, you could have introduced his traits at a slower pace.
Again, five stars. <333
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