Re: Behind the Eyes of Cipher
Bravo, I say, Brovo!
I use this expression sparingly, but this story is, simply put, epic. The storyline is engrossing, the description perfect, everything... great. I loved reading the first two chapters, and I can't wait for more. It's obvious that you have been writing for a while, but here's one tip: Try not to use actual numbers, instead, write out the word. Specifically, I am referring to the first paragraph of the first chapter, where you described
Caiden's heighth. Otherwise, a great story.
Rated five stars.