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Old 02-14-2009, 08:23 AM
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Default Re: Through The Eyes Of A Flareon

Like the last chapter this was described really well, and I love all the emotions you described^^ I'm really curious as to what that golem was talking about now, and about the two trainers.

I didn't notice any typos this time-the only thing I thought sounded weird were the times it mentioned "HP". I think it would make more sense to describe it as loosing strength or something like that.

After reading this chapter I'm even more interested to see where the plot goes, and I'm looking forward to reading the next one!
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