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Old 11-08-2008, 04:41 AM
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Default Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 6 is Up!]

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Originally Posted by Lord Celebi View Post
Lol, Mike did mind, and I felt a bit guilty.

Better to end with the reader wanting more than to drag it through the dirt, amirite? I'll see what I can do about lengthening Chapter 7. Expect that Sunday.
Yeah! I minded! haha Also yeah. Rust felt guilty! haha Let him feel guilty! It is working in our favor. haha Still nah. I just want to make it clear to the reader that Neo and Rust were the heroes and not just Rust since that is what I saw(or think I saw) when it came to Diabora's demise in this dimension.

Yeah. That is true. You do want to leave the reader wanting more. Still don't just leave us with candy and not giving us desert. haha

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