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Old 11-08-2008, 02:03 AM
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Default Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 6 is Up!]

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Originally Posted by Snow Fairy Sugar View Post
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I'm only finding one thing wrong with this Fanfic. It's so good that...it seems to end too fast. T_T

Rust, you gotta write longer ones...not that it would make any difference, it just seems shorter at something exciting, right? xD

-Is perched on the cliff- :]
Yeah, lol, this was actually one of the shorter chapters. Most chapters are around four pages. In this chapter and the next, I'm trying to focus more on Neo and Mike, because I have been focusing waaay too much on rust (no surprise :P). Because of my inexperience with writing these two characters, it does get a little bit short. :/
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