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Old 11-03-2008, 06:24 AM
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Default Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 5.5 is Up!]

Wow! Two stories in one? Cool! ^^

I loved the fight between rust and Kazzem. The fact that he knew he could beat him, but was still scared of him...that was really well done.
And poor Neo got a busted nose out of it. ^^'

Now there's a whole other side...literally!
The whole thing with the Star of Oblivion sounds very interesting. A meteor who's minerals cause mutations in humans? Scary.
The reactions around the world seem entirely plausible as well. There would be some ready to help, and others ready to take advantage.

I have ADD and I love more than one story-line! Nice!
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