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Old 11-03-2008, 04:01 AM
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Default Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 5 is Up!]

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Originally Posted by Neo Pikachu View Post
Sorry about the dated responses. I honestly didn't expect so many updates so quickly.

First off, I am AMAZED at how many loose ends from Team RP II and V that you've managed to tie up. Everything from Kahara to Alvaj-Xoc and the actual creation of Diabora was flawless and connects aspects that were never covered in the RPs. I know I left Alvaj-Xoc as a loose end, but I love what you've done with him. That takes serious skill to do, and you pulled it off like there was nothing to it.

I like what you've done with the characters as well. The rivalry between rust and Neo is very well done, and its interesting and even somewhat comical to see them have to tolerate each other seeing as how Diabora is the bigger threat to address. And lastly, the music soundtrack you've added in there is a nice touch.

Fantastic work, man, I love what you've done with this.
Lol, when I write, I write.

Yeah, I have a mental list of all the loose ends I want to get tied up with this fiction, so this is sort of the beginning of that. I got a couple more good ones coming up too...

The soundtrack bit was inspired by your Trial of Juno soundtrack. XD I thought it was a good idea.

Anyways, thanks much.

Also, DT, great Chapter. ^_^ There was a lot needed to be covered, and I think you got it all.
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