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Old 10-29-2008, 04:18 AM
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Default Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 2 is Up!]

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Originally Posted by k_pop View Post
Just had to stop and leave a comment for you. Afraid I'm a little lost by all the strange names, but you've described it well enough that I'm catching on.
I didn't follow WAR, but this sounds exciting. I might have to learn a little more about it.
Diabora sounds completely, well...horrendous! Yeah, I think that works. All that power makes it seem like nothing can stop him. And being able to bring back the dead!? oO
I like all the main characters though. Especially rust and Neo's seemingly constant rivalry. I can't wait to read more of this. ^^
Yeah, sorry about that. I've been writing it with Neo, Mikey, and the rest of my RPing buddies in mind. Now that I know I have some other readership, I'll try my best to explain some of the concepts. If you get lost, just ask, I'll be sure to elaborate.

Yes, Diabora is horrendous. He killed Team RP II, he's that bad. I am also quite enjoying writing for rust and Neo, actually. It feels almost like grade-school fights. You'll love the scene I'm planning later on which eases the rivalry.
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