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Old 10-24-2008, 05:04 AM
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Default Re: Within Her Wildest Wishes

You wrote a fic? Cool!
I really like it too. The beginning certainly created drama, and those gold rooms have me confused.
For some reason, I was thinking that guy was gonna turn around and not have a face. Maybe I saw it on the Twilight Zone. Hmm....
Anyway, good job! I don't think I saw anything else to fix. Keep it up. ^^
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