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Old 10-08-2008, 08:15 PM
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Default Re: Pokemon Academy!

Not bad, especially with the sand tornado, xD
Anyway, I didn't see any spelling or grammar mistakes with this chapter, and I'm looking forward to more. It'd be interesting if Paul ended up battling Naomi.
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