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Old 10-07-2008, 01:54 AM
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Default Re: Vampire Knight Fanfic Preview

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Originally Posted by Michelle8936 View Post
Not bad, but you need more description as well to lengthen the story.
Take a look at mine if you want;
The Experiment
IT'S NOT FINISHED YET! HINCE THE PART IN THE NAME CALLED "PREVIEW" don't ask, i felt like using caps lock
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