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Old 10-06-2008, 05:28 PM
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Default Re: Pokemon Academy!

Hm, it sounds like an interesting beginning.
The only errors I found were that summer and kitchen aren't supposed to be capitalized unless they're at the beginning of a sentence, but otherwise, it was flawless in both grammar and spelling.
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