Originally Posted by Guard13007
Cliched? Oh well, it's not like I'm trying to send these in to a publisher. And that's just my style, if you don't like it or think it's bad, then fine. It's just not your cup of tea.
And finally, I know poetry isn't all depressed but a lot of it that I've seen is. And again, that's just how I view it.
If you want to see good poetry, go here: Xenowave
Alright, alright. I wouldn't be the one to judge your poetry, anyway. I looked over my little comments again, and I think I wrote them as if I was reviewing an essay rather than poems. <_<
Originally Posted by iplaygc
And BTW--redundancy can be a really good thing in poetry, if utilized properly. Plus, the meaning of every little thought doesn't have to be perfectly clear. It's a form of art that you can only develop by making it... you.
~IGC t DM+
Yeah, there you go. Listen to her.