Originally Posted by Scytherwolf
Yeah, I need to get better at making sure there's no mistakes in my own story ^^;
And yes, the battles were some of the most interesting parts of this story to read. I just love the way you write them-they're exciting and not at all predictable, so it's hard to guess what the outcome will be. (And that is a very good thing! =D)
I caught a few mistakes in the first chapter. Are you going to go over them again?
I should do that with mine, but they take waaayyy too long to do that...
Unpredictable battles are my speciality it seems. =3 I'm happy with that.