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Old 06-04-2008, 10:50 AM
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Default Re: Pokemon: Team StormRiders

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Originally Posted by Scytherwolf View Post
Yeah, I need to get better at making sure there's no mistakes in my own story ^^;

And yes, the battles were some of the most interesting parts of this story to read. I just love the way you write them-they're exciting and not at all predictable, so it's hard to guess what the outcome will be. (And that is a very good thing! =D)
I caught a few mistakes in the first chapter. Are you going to go over them again?

I should do that with mine, but they take waaayyy too long to do that...

Unpredictable battles are my speciality it seems. =3 I'm happy with that.
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