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Old 06-04-2008, 10:32 AM
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Default Re: Pokemon: Team StormRiders

Originally Posted by Scytherwolf View Post
I finished reading all the current chapters, and I'm really impressed with your writing style, especially the battle scenes. I love the way you describe the attacks, and Kraal's attack against Scythe was one I really liked in particular^^

So far my favorite character is Rye, and I think he's an awesome character. I'm glad that Scythe won't die though, she's definately one of my favorite pokémon villain characters out of all the stories I've read.

I didn't find any mistakes, and everything is really well written. Great job and keep it up! =3
That's praise....thanks a whole bunch SW. =3

I love it that you love my battles. They're the best to write because they're so interesting and you have to think exactly like a trainer would. As in, 'this so and so attack is coming...what would you do?'. See, see?

Rye's my favourite character too, and K-pop's.....just check out her

And Scythe won't die just yet...I have something planned for her...
You'll see in upcoming chapters. ^_^

(I double checked this one for mistakes ;) )

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