Originally Posted by Latias_Rider
Thanks for your comment, ScytherWolf. ^_^
I'm glad you like my battles. I try to describe them really well, so you know exactly what's going on. I also try my best to make the characters think on their feet, as if they were in a real battle, which they kind of are anyway.
Take your time, there's really no hurry, and I hope to hear from you soon.
~Next chapter up in a couple of hours at the most. =3
I finished reading all the current chapters, and I'm really impressed with your writing style, especially the battle scenes. I love the way you describe the attacks, and Kraal's attack against Scythe was one I really liked in particular^^
So far my favorite character is Rye, and I think he's an awesome character. I'm glad that Scythe won't die though, she's definately one of my favorite pokémon villain characters out of all the stories I've read.
I didn't find any mistakes, and everything is really well written. Great job and keep it up! =3