Thread: [Pokemon] The Path of Destiny (PG/PG-13)
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Old 06-04-2008, 03:23 AM
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Default Re: The Path of Destiny (PG/PG-13)

First, I want to say that I loved that chapter. Second, I only noticed one typo. When the Arcanine was saying "you deserve a better life," Instead of saying "Fiend," it said "friend." Lol. Third, you actually made those plushies?! Holy Mushroom, those are awsome!
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