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Old 05-03-2008, 08:34 PM
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Default Re: [REGION] .:.:The Hygor Region:.:. *Help Please!*

Originally Posted by Wolfnoid View Post
Name: Wolf
Biodata: A dark type gym leader
Pokemon 1: Mightyena
Pokemon 2: Umbreon
Pokemon 3: Tyranitar
Pokemon 4: Absol
You need more description on your leader's life, and also on your pokemon's life. How'd they meet? Where'd you meet? Etc.

Magentaman - I'll add those. If you could make a 2nd evo, it could be the bird line. ^^
Busted 101 - You have too much extra space, and we need more then Darkelm on fire. I appreciate you trying though. ^^
Camerupt - I'll add that, thanks! ^^
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