Thread: [Pokemon] The Path of Destiny (PG/PG-13)
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Old 04-11-2008, 11:20 PM
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Default Re: The Path of Destiny (PG/PG-13)

I, personally, think that this chapter was one of the best that I have seen so far. I like how you introduced the other Scyther, but one complaint: what was her name? If she is going to come back later in the story, then don't tell me, but if not, What was her name? I wonder what the stone has to do with Blazefang... Well, a perfect chapter, I think .
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