Thread: [Pokemon] The Path of Destiny (PG/PG-13)
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Old 04-03-2008, 01:47 AM
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Default Re: The Path of Destiny (PG/PG-13)

Originally Posted by Scytherwolf View Post
Oh, do you remember where it was so I can fix it?
Yeah, that was one of the two typos I saw. ^^; Here:

“Sure seems like it,” Snowcrystal replied with a smirk. “Now,” she added, addressing Stormblade this time, “I assume you came here to rest? Well I did two. We should stay here for the night then continue on in the morning.”
And if I'm not mistaken, I think a comma should be before, "too". Dunno for sure, grammar is my biggest letdown in my stories. ^^;

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