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Old 03-31-2008, 01:07 AM
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Default Re: SonicX: Dark Storm

You reviewed mine, now I'm going to review yours: not bad! not bad at all! Please make future chapters longer, and I suggest you don't make the entire first chapter a prelude. Maybe make a prelude inside the first chapter. I'm glad you're putting Nazo in it, I've been looking for a fan fic. with him in it. He's awsome!
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