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Old 10-23-2007, 05:10 PM
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Default Re: Pokemon- The war of the roses.

There's many flaws to this RP..
There is no Sign-up for people to copy and paste, The Plot is small.

Also, you haven't explained who the white/ red roses are...
'Many years in the future pokemon have begun' is also phrased wrong... because Many years in the future is not happening right that very moment is it?
Many mistakes... Plus, this isn't even in the right Place.. This should be in sign-ups...
Poor quality...
-shakes head-

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