Re: Ideas and Premises
Well, I do like the idea, but it's weak in several places, and maybe I can help you strengthen it.
I'd suggest having the Absol being forced into stopping the disaster, rather than doing it by his own will; else you will be cracked down upon for a save-the-world-fic. But plenty of good fics are save-the-world fics, so doing that would help. Secondly, give there a reason for the Ninetales to meet with the Absol. And lastly...why would Darkrai want to corrupt Mew's mind in the first place. Fix those up, and you'll do great.