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Old 05-31-2007, 11:22 AM
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Default Re: The Adventures of Charlie The Unicorn: candy mountain and more favorites. [so fun

Hate to say it, but this really isn't a fan fiction, its more of a script without any detail, background, or plot to it. Also, I already know this isn't your original idea. It would be a lot better if you work on something that was...

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