Re: Pokemon: the quest to find a Lucario
dude...... this sucks bigtime o-o here're some tips:
1.) add more desciption to it. like.... Brandon should talk to the guy and ask stuff and get more info. also, maybe some stuff on the way to the hills.
2.)add more a lot of stuff. IT'S TO SHORT FOR GOD'S SAKE!!!!!!O-O... sorry for flaming...