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Old 05-26-2007, 10:05 PM
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Default Re: Pokemon: the quest to find a Lucario

It needs to be waaaaaaaay longer. More descriptive, gently lead into things. You CAN make it better. Well, thats all from me. Keep trying, post the next chapter soon and I'll be back!
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