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Old 05-19-2007, 05:36 PM
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Default Re: Pokemon: the quest to find a Lucario

This is to short,no presentation and sorta boring.Here is a little resume

Brandon see's a Lucario

that is all there is,even if this is the Prelogue you still need something that will have people want to read this.

4/10 i did not see any grammar problems
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