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Old 05-08-2007, 10:23 PM
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Default Re: Pokèmon Mystery Dungeon.My version

Originally Posted by Hoshika View Post
The sware words burn my eyes. =(

Could you make it a little less clumpier, please?
Care to explain?,well about the sware words.I try all I can to block them,but i won't change the story.And for the record,i am only transfering.I already wrote 12 chapter for this story,so all i am doing now is editing and adding.Also i guess i will point out that there are a few explination chapters,but even though they don't have that much comedy they have story.A good story that guess far beyond the game.Well i guess i will post my update in a few minutes.
Thank You for posting Hoshika and Eeveeking929.
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